Alin Dragu

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    Round One: Alin vs ChatGPT in Copywriting!

    That’s right!

    I challenged your good friend ChadGPT to a battle royal.

    I’ve had some of the AI-boys floundering around in my email replies wondering why I’m not building some copywriting agency using AI to write sales pages like them bladdy blah.

    So I said enough is enough! =)

    I put my Email Players hat & clear frame glasses on and opened up my browser straight to ChadGPT.

    Here’s what happened next…

    ALIN: Hello, ChatGPT.

    CHADGPT: Hello! How can I assist you today?

    ALIN: I challenge you to a Copywriting Battle!

    CHADGPT: Challenge accepted! What’s the topic or product we’ll be crafting copy for?

    ALIN: Athletic Greens (drinkag1.com)


    For context

    I chose a neutral product that I’ve never written copy for or done research for. The only resource either of us had was their website.

    Also, I timed myself to 5 minutes max to write the copy.


    CHADGPT: Great choice! How about we each create a headline, a sub-headline, and a short paragraph for an ad promoting Athletic Greens? Let’s get started. You can go first or I can start, whichever you prefer!

    ALIN: That sounds like a plan! How about you go first. I want to make sure you don’t swipe my gems =)

    CHADGPT: Alright, here we go:

    Headline:

    “Transform Your Health with One Scoop a Day”

    Subheadline:

    “All-In-One Nutritional Insurance for a Vibrant Life”

    Short Paragraph:

    Experience the power of comprehensive nutrition with Athletic Greens. Our all-in-one formula is packed with 75 vitamins, minerals, and whole food-sourced ingredients designed to support your energy, immunity, and overall well-being. Just one scoop a day gives you the essential nutrients you need to thrive, so you can feel your best every day. Whether you’re an athlete or just looking to improve your health, Athletic Greens has got you covered.

    Your turn!


    You guys can already tell I’m going to win, right?

    (Or will I…. I’m shiveringgggg 🥶)


    ALIN: You’re toast. Here you go:

    Headline

    Add 6 Years To Your Life In Just 90 Seconds Per Day.

    Sub Headline

    The simple scoop towards longevity.

    Paragraph

    The average American lifespan for someone who doesn’t get their daily greens is 67 years old. That lifespan goes up by 6 (or more) years when you simply get greens. So we took 75 key ingredients you need to consume in one day and put it in one tasty scoop. But don’t take our word for it… ask the 38,786+ people who now have more energy, vitality and longevity.

    CHADGPT: Both versions are compelling, with mine focusing on overall health benefits and yours emphasizing longevity and social proof. What do you think of the results?

    ALIN: I win.

    CHADGPT: Well done! Your copy is indeed very compelling and effectively leverages powerful statistics and social proof. I can agree that you took this one. Would you like me to rewrite it?

    ALIN: Negative, I shall celebrate my victory with a creamy black espresso. Goodbye, ChatGPT!


    And there you have it folks!

    Alin – 1

    ChadGPT – 0

    So I have a questions for you:

    Should I battle ChatGPT again? And if so, what product should we write copy for?

    Until tomorrow — your friend,

    Alin “Beats ChadGPT” Dragu

    P.S. The reason I was able to write copy so fast (and better) is because I used a classic copywriting hook framework I teach in lesson six of my Write Publish Chill course here →

    https://writepublishchill.com

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